Writing Children's Fiction, by Yvonne Coppard and Linda Newbery, reviewed by Pippa Goodhart

 

Unusually for a ‘how to’ book, this book makes a very enjoyable, as well as interesting read, whether or not you are looking for specific information.  Written, back and forth in short chunks, between the two authors and referencing numerous others, its style is lively and fun at the same time as being highly informative, clear, and full of wisdom.  Those bite-sized chunks make this very much a ‘just one more’ sort of a read, and you find yourself gobbling it up far faster than you intended! 

The two authors tell their own personal tales of reading and writing and being published.  But this is no self-indulgent wallow.  It is a highly practical book, well indexed and referenced in ways which enable you to go straight to any particular point you may be after.  And it is really up-to-date with the politics and developments in the current children’s book market. 

The book falls into three sections.  The first section is discussing children’s books.  It tells you why and how children’s books are important, but also how they can offer a wonderful opportunity to writers who want to explore story in ways that writing for adults simply doesn’t allow.  It tells how it is very hard to write for children, but also how fun and how powerful it can be.  That’s exciting. 

The second section gives short accounts by a range of important children’s authors who talk about their own, very different, experiences of writing.  A wonderful, amusing, account of the very strong family stuff that set Jennifer Donnelly writing historical fiction.  Read how Frank Cottrell-Boyce likes to write with no ending in mind but the promise that a ‘flash of lightning’ will arrive at the end of a narrative to show how to make sense of it all.  Mal Peet tells us to ‘be wary of research.  It’s like a helpful passenger with the dangerous habit of trying to grab the wheel’.  And Andy Stanton writes funny-seriously about the importance of writing funny books.  And much more.

In the third section we get practical advice about each stage of writing and submitting.   

This book even tells which sort of children’s book is most sought after by publishers at the moment.  But if you want to know what that is, you’ll have to read the book!

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A Gathering Light by Jennifer Donnelly. Reviewed by Sue Barrow.

A Gathering Light is the story of sixteen year old Mattie Gokey, a lover of words and books, who dreams one day of leaving her backwater home town for college and independence in New York where she hopes to become a writer. Standing in her way is the promise she made to her dying mother to care for her younger sisters and overworked father after her mother’s early death.

The story, set in the Adirondacks at the start of the twentieth century, is fictional, but cleverly interwoven around the real-life murder of Grace Brown, a girl of Mattie’s own age. At first it appears that the girl has drowned in a boating accident. Mattie is working at the hotel where Grace Brown was staying with her fiancé and when her body is brought back to the hotel, Mattie is deeply affected by her sudden and shocking death. It is not until she reads the letters which Grace Brown entrusted to her that she begins to piece together the evidence which leads her to an altogether different conclusion. At the same time there is also a dawning awareness for Mattie that although their backgrounds are very different, Grace’s story and the choices open to her, run parallel to her own. As the story builds to its climax, Mattie is forced to decide what kind of future she wants - college and the opportunity to develop her writing gift or settling for what is expected of her, staying in Old Forge and marrying ‘the boy next door.’

The book flows in a wonderful way and although the chapters alternate between seasons, Donnelly’s use of past and present tense avoid any confusion and add to the emotional strength of the story. If I have a criticism it is that the narrative sometimes labours under the weight of the number of contemporary issues addressed - racism, female emancipation, family loyalty, not to mention bereavement and young love. But Mattie is a compelling character with an original voice and her interactions with Royal Loomis, the ‘boyfriend’, and her other peers, are authentic and convincing.

The story is sensitively and beautifully written, almost poetic at times, painting a true to life picture of small town America at the turn of the century. Jennifer Donnelly is not a prolific writer for the young adult market but having read this book twice and now thinking of reading her Tea Rose trilogy, I was left hoping that she might come back to A Gathering Light and think of adding a sequel. I for one would love to know what became of Mattie!

A Gathering Light: Bloomsbury 2003
ISBN 9780747570639
380 pages £6.99

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